试试 - 写写

伊连

试着用英语写出下面这几句话, 尽可能用简单的词. 我把英文的原文附在后面, 不过, 一定要先写完再看呀 - 对比一下, 你写的与原文有什么区别呢?

"当你观察一棵树的时候，你看到了什么？树干、树枝和树叶。你还能看见些什么呢？
树是有着单一木制茎部——树干——的高大植物。较小的枝条从树干中长出，这些枝条上长满叶子（通常为绿色）。"
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下面是原文（draggging your mouse）:

When you look at a tree, what do you see? The trunk, the branches, and the leaves. What else do you see?

A tree is a tall plant with a single stem of wood - the trunk. Smaller branches grow out from the trunk, and the leaves(usually green) grow on these branches.

topspeed

伊连，这个so 长啊，我都吓怕了，考试时见到写作文都是

...烟火...

when you watch a tree,what can you see?
trunks,branches and leaves,what else?
Tree is a kind of tall plant which has single wooden stem--trunk.Smaller branches grow from the trunk and covered with leaves(Usually green).

People often say if you want to improve your English ,you must open your mouth.So maybe there are many mistakes in my sentences.Please point them to me!Thank you!

steele

Have a try.

What have you seen when you watch a tree? Trunk, branches and leaves. What else in your eyes?

Trees are high plants with a single timber stalk -- trunk. Smaller branches grow out of the trunk and covered by numerous leaves (usually of green colour).

...烟火...

看完楼上的，觉得自己差距啊...呵呵努力丢人，努力练习，努力提高！

steele

不是啊，你写得很好。你看原文和你得比较像来着。共同学习，共同学习。

...烟火...

刚看到原文，呵呵我完全中国式英语翻译，主要原因在于我是一个超级语法盲。哈哈

大土人

Trunks, branches, and leaves – what else do you see when observing trees?

Trees are usually high plants with wooden stem, or say trunk, from which smaller branches grow surrounded by green leaves - at least mostly are green.

topspeed

dragging your mouse 哈哈

哈哈，这个隐藏答案的方法真巧妙啊。

大土人

Cool, that’s magic!