My english diary

钱多多

From now on , I will be here to record somethings and thoughts ,I hope to share with you .
I hope you can correct the errors in my diary, I would be very grateful to you .
-----(wrong: If  there are any errors in my diary , I hope you can correct  me  ,I would be  very grateful  for   you.   
       grammar: grateful  for sth.   grateful to sb.)
I believe I can stick to learning english.

钱多多

December 1 , 2010
There are many thing in this world with a scientific explanation is impossible.
such as ,when I was in  senior high school, I can't found my admission card, then ,one of my classmates told me "your admission card is in your diary",
half  a year later, I  found  it in my diary .
I dreamed my college entrance examination scores . It's so amazing , this scores the same as ture scroes.
I dreamed a former colleague get married in a day ,  and later ,I learned he really get married in that day.
I dreamed  I would  die in april 2010, in fact ,  I resigned in that month ,and  a new life began ~~
I like beijing , l like outdoor, I like FB, I like each of you ~~
the most impotant  thing is , I started to like english , I'm very happy ~~

空降兵

哈哈，那我通过你的日记提高我的阅读好了

伊连

引用楼主果果豆丁于2010-12-02 00:06发表的 My  english diary :
If  there are any errors in my diary , I hope you can correct  me  ,I would be  very grateful  for   you :)

英语思维, 一般是把句子的重点放在最前面说, 这点跟汉语不同. 所以这样可能更符合英文习惯:
I hope you can correct the errors in my English (or diary) . I would be very grateful to you.

be grateful to sb. (for sth.)

果果豆丁写得很好, 鼓励鼓励~~~~~~

超级赛亚包

学习  感谢依莲

空降兵

哈哈，很强大，如果要是能梦到我未来会怎么样，可以告诉我。

青寒芷殇冰蝶

要努力学习了

topspeed

Good Idea

leap_飘雪

up up

topspeed

yeh，capital idea！